2019.08.07
英文メールの書き方：同僚の成果物について感想を述べる
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Hello everyone. Welcome to E-mail Picks. Oh my God it's so hot today. I can feel my
0:00:10.590,0:00:15.389
skin burn under the sun. This has got to
stop! By the way, in our product
0:00:15.389,0:00:20.580
development team, we've been discussing how to communicate our brand better.
0:00:20.580,0:00:25.230
You can learn how to communicate effectively in global business at Bizmates.
0:00:25.230,0:00:29.730
Yes, that's true, but that's not the reason
people stay with us. Our students stay
0:00:29.730,0:00:33.840
with us because they have a good time.
They have a good time talking to their
0:00:33.840,0:00:38.940
trainers forming friendships with people
from other cultures. One of the greatest
0:00:38.940,0:00:43.860
sensations of life, I think, is sharing
laughter with somebody from a different
0:00:43.860,0:00:49.079
culture. That means you have connected
with that person at a deeper level than
0:00:49.079,0:00:53.129
the cultural differences on the surface.
Anyway, one of my colleagues has just
0:00:53.129,0:00:58.350
made a video that aims to communicate
the fun part of the Bizmates experience.
0:00:58.350,0:01:03.510
And I saw it, and I have to say it was
great. I felt it really helped to
0:01:03.510,0:01:08.100
visualize the brand image we are trying
to portray, and therefore I really feel I
0:01:08.100,0:01:12.510
need to comment on it. So today, I'm going to write to my colleague Yumi to tell
0:01:12.510,0:01:19.290
her how I felt about her work. Here goes.
Yumi, I think the video was excellent.
0:01:19.290,0:01:23.400
I couldn't help but chuckle at various
points although I tried hard not to.
0:01:23.400,0:01:27.450
could point out some areas we can refine
but I think this video really
0:01:27.450,0:01:31.439
accomplishes our goal to show what kind
of brand bizmates should aim to become.
0:01:31.439,0:01:37.590
Looking forward to seeing more of these,
Kyota. OKy so the goal of my e-mail is to
0:01:37.590,0:01:41.070
give encouragement to Yumi because she did a good job
0:01:41.070,0:01:45.869
meeting the objective, but I can't
sound all super-duper excited and happy
0:01:45.869,0:01:48.680
because that would go against
the
0:01:48.680,0:01:53.870
my personal brand image that I have
built over the past 10 years or so so I
0:01:53.870,0:01:58.460
wrote "I couldn't help but chuckle at various points, although I tried hard not
0:01:58.460,0:02:03.710
to." I think she'll understand how much I
enjoyed the video by writing like this. And
0:02:03.710,0:02:08.479
I finished the e-mail with "looking
forward to seeing more of these" to,
0:02:08.479,0:02:12.650
again communicate my excitement in a
controlled manner. In a controlled manner.
0:02:12.650,0:02:18.260
OK so there you go. An e-mail to comment
on a colleague's deliverable. I'm sorry I
0:02:18.260,0:02:22.040
can't show you the video yet because
it's just a prototype. But hopefully
0:02:22.040,0:02:26.330
we'll be able to deliver some similar
products to you soon. Anyway, that's it
0:02:26.330,0:02:30.340
for today. Thanks for watching and I'll
see you next week.
Hello everyone. Welcome to E-mail Picks. Oh my God it's so hot today. I can feel my
0:00:10.590,0:00:15.389
skin burn under the sun. This has got to
stop! By the way, in our product
0:00:15.389,0:00:20.580
development team, we've been discussing how to communicate our brand better.
0:00:20.580,0:00:25.230
You can learn how to communicate effectively in global business at Bizmates.
0:00:25.230,0:00:29.730
Yes, that's true, but that's not the reason
people stay with us. Our students stay
0:00:29.730,0:00:33.840
with us because they have a good time.
They have a good time talking to their
0:00:33.840,0:00:38.940
trainers forming friendships with people
from other cultures. One of the greatest
0:00:38.940,0:00:43.860
sensations of life, I think, is sharing
laughter with somebody from a different
0:00:43.860,0:00:49.079
culture. That means you have connected
with that person at a deeper level than
0:00:49.079,0:00:53.129
the cultural differences on the surface.
Anyway, one of my colleagues has just
0:00:53.129,0:00:58.350
made a video that aims to communicate
the fun part of the Bizmates experience.
0:00:58.350,0:01:03.510
And I saw it, and I have to say it was
great. I felt it really helped to
0:01:03.510,0:01:08.100
visualize the brand image we are trying
to portray, and therefore I really feel I
0:01:08.100,0:01:12.510
need to comment on it. So today, I'm going to write to my colleague Yumi to tell
0:01:12.510,0:01:19.290
her how I felt about her work. Here goes.
Yumi, I think the video was excellent.
0:01:19.290,0:01:23.400
I couldn't help but chuckle at various
points although I tried hard not to.
0:01:23.400,0:01:27.450
could point out some areas we can refine
but I think this video really
0:01:27.450,0:01:31.439
accomplishes our goal to show what kind
of brand bizmates should aim to become.
0:01:31.439,0:01:37.590
Looking forward to seeing more of these,
Kyota. OKy so the goal of my e-mail is to
0:01:37.590,0:01:41.070
give encouragement to Yumi because she did a good job
0:01:41.070,0:01:45.869
meeting the objective, but I can't
sound all super-duper excited and happy
0:01:45.869,0:01:48.680
because that would go against
the
0:01:48.680,0:01:53.870
my personal brand image that I have
built over the past 10 years or so so I
0:01:53.870,0:01:58.460
wrote "I couldn't help but chuckle at various points, although I tried hard not
0:01:58.460,0:02:03.710
to." I think she'll understand how much I
enjoyed the video by writing like this. And
0:02:03.710,0:02:08.479
I finished the e-mail with "looking
forward to seeing more of these" to,
0:02:08.479,0:02:12.650
again communicate my excitement in a
controlled manner. In a controlled manner.
0:02:12.650,0:02:18.260
OK so there you go. An e-mail to comment
on a colleague's deliverable. I'm sorry I
0:02:18.260,0:02:22.040
can't show you the video yet because
it's just a prototype. But hopefully
0:02:22.040,0:02:26.330
we'll be able to deliver some similar
products to you soon. Anyway, that's it
0:02:26.330,0:02:30.340
for today. Thanks for watching and I'll
see you next week.
