2018.04.18
英文メールの書き方:上司に相談を持ちかける
こんなシチュエーション、お仕事でありませんか?
不慣れなプロジェクトの進め方について上司に相談したい。でも上司は出張中。助言を請うために、メールを書かなければなりません。
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ヒカさん、
バギオ市ではいかがお過ごしですか?
緊急の用事ではないのですが、プロジェクトの進め方について、少し迷っています。プロジェクトの初めからIT部を巻き込むべきか、それともこちらで明確な要望をまとめるまで待つべきだと思いますか?実現性について、私一人では判断がつかないことがいくつかあるように思えます。
お時間のある時にご意見をいただきたいです。よろしくお願いします。
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new feature will benefit our customers
and us. and also to determine exactly
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what this feature will do. So what would
the customers see? What will happen
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backstage? - Everything. And then, I'm going
to hand over the specifications to our
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IT department so that they can start
development, but the problem is I'm not
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an IT expert.
I've studied coding just a little, but
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just a little is not good enough for me
to be able to tell what's possible and
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what is not. I can't really tell the
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right now, so should I talk to IT first
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put together a proposal for IT and ask
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for advice because his desk is right
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e-mail to ask for his advice today. Now I
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stay in the Philippines and he won't
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advice is not urgent. Alright so here goes:
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Hi Hika, I hope you've been having a
productive and enjoyable time in Baguio.
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This is by no means urgent, but I was
wondering how I should proceed with my
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project. Do you think I should involve
the IT department right from the start
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or wait until I have put together a
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things I cannot tell the feasibility of
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what you think when you find the time?
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all, I wrote a quick greeting.
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Our Philippines office is located. Next, I
wrote "this is by no means urgent" so that
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Hika won't think he needs to reply
immediately. And then I explained the
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situation. Lastly, I wrote "could you tell
me what you think when you find the time?"
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that I am not in a rush. Okay, so there
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you go. An e-mail to ask your boss for
advice. So until Hika gets back to me,
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for watching and I'll see you later.