2018.08.29
英文メールの書き方：オフィス移転について社内に告知する
こんなシチュエーション、お仕事でありませんか？
社員数の増加に伴い、オフィス移転が決定したことを社内で告知しなければなりません。メール文の中で、移転が直接影響する社員とそうでない社員に対して異なる情報を宛てなければなりません。
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Bizmatesのみなさま、
この度、新しいフィリピンオフィスの開設されることとなりました。事業や商品ラインアップの拡充に伴い、より多くの社員が働け、商品の展示が可能な施設への移転を進めていました。
新しいオフィスは、現在のオフィス同様アラバン地区に位置し、一ヶ月後に移転を行います。Bizmatesフィリピンにお勤めのみなさまには、管理部から数週間以内に指示があります。
新オフィスの画像を添付しましたので、新しい環境でのお仕事をご想像いただければと思います。
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Hello, everyone!
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Welcome to E-mail Picks.
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It's mid-August and it's still hot here in
Tokyo.
00:00:12.550 --> 00:00:17.760
There's a colleague visiting us from the Philippines
and she tells us it's cooler in the Philippines.
00:00:17.760 --> 00:00:21.130
I am very jealous.
00:00:21.130 --> 00:00:25.810
Speaking of the Philippines: our Philippines
office is going to relocate to a bigger place
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- a much bigger place, later this year.
00:00:28.890 --> 00:00:32.980
And the construction company is working on
the interior renovation right now and I've
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only seen a few computer graphics images,
but it looks like it's going to look great.
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So I was asked to put together a quick e-mail announcement about the office relocation
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and this e-mail will be sent to everyone in
our Philippines office and our Japan office.
00:00:50.170 --> 00:00:54.059
And I'd like to make it sound exciting so
that we can start imagining what it will be
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like to work in that new office.
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So let's see how that e-mail will go.
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Ladies and gentlemen of Bizmates,
We are delighted to announce the opening of
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our new Philippines office.
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As our operations and product lines have expanded,
we had been working on relocating to a facility
00:01:09.719 --> 00:01:13.890
that would allow us to house more employees
and showcase our products.
00:01:13.890 --> 00:01:18.700
The new office is located in Alabang as our
current office is, and the move will take
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place a month later.
00:01:20.230 --> 00:01:24.340
For those working at Bizmates Philippines,
instructions about the move will be announced
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from the control department within the next
few weeks.
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For now, please envision yourself working
in the new work environment with the attached
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images of the new office.
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Thank you.
00:01:33.479 --> 00:01:40.079
Okay, so in the first paragraph, I'm explaining
why we are relocating to a bigger place.
00:01:40.079 --> 00:01:45.400
In the next paragraph, I'm talking about the
timing of the move first, and now I needed
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to inform my colleagues in the Philippines
that detailed instructions will come later
00:01:50.069 --> 00:01:54.890
by writing: "instructions about the move will
be announced from the control department within
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the next few weeks.
00:01:57.030 --> 00:02:01.950
But this message is only for the Philippines
office, not for the Japan office, that's why
00:02:01.950 --> 00:02:06.380
I wrote: "for those working at Bizmates Philippines"
00:02:06.380 --> 00:02:11.280
And then I close the e-mail by writing a positive
message and letting the readers know there
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are sample images attached in this e-mail.
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So there you go, an e-mail to announce and
office relocation.
00:02:18.350 --> 00:02:23.200
I'm scheduled to visit the new office in October
and I'm certainly very very excited about it
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Okay, so that's it for today.
00:02:25.370 --> 00:02:27.120
Thanks for watching and I'll see you next
week.
Hello, everyone!
00:00:06.420 --> 00:00:08.220
Welcome to E-mail Picks.
00:00:08.220 --> 00:00:12.550
It's mid-August and it's still hot here in
Tokyo.
00:00:12.550 --> 00:00:17.760
There's a colleague visiting us from the Philippines
and she tells us it's cooler in the Philippines.
00:00:17.760 --> 00:00:21.130
I am very jealous.
00:00:21.130 --> 00:00:25.810
Speaking of the Philippines: our Philippines
office is going to relocate to a bigger place
00:00:25.810 --> 00:00:28.890
- a much bigger place, later this year.
00:00:28.890 --> 00:00:32.980
And the construction company is working on
the interior renovation right now and I've
00:00:32.980 --> 00:00:39.190
only seen a few computer graphics images,
but it looks like it's going to look great.
00:00:39.190 --> 00:00:43.420
So I was asked to put together a quick e-mail announcement about the office relocation
00:00:43.500 --> 00:00:50.160
and this e-mail will be sent to everyone in
our Philippines office and our Japan office.
00:00:50.170 --> 00:00:54.059
And I'd like to make it sound exciting so
that we can start imagining what it will be
00:00:54.059 --> 00:00:56.580
like to work in that new office.
00:00:56.580 --> 00:00:59.440
So let's see how that e-mail will go.
00:00:59.440 --> 00:01:03.210
Ladies and gentlemen of Bizmates,
We are delighted to announce the opening of
00:01:03.210 --> 00:01:05.080
our new Philippines office.
00:01:05.080 --> 00:01:09.719
As our operations and product lines have expanded,
we had been working on relocating to a facility
00:01:09.719 --> 00:01:13.890
that would allow us to house more employees
and showcase our products.
00:01:13.890 --> 00:01:18.700
The new office is located in Alabang as our
current office is, and the move will take
00:01:18.700 --> 00:01:20.230
place a month later.
00:01:20.230 --> 00:01:24.340
For those working at Bizmates Philippines,
instructions about the move will be announced
00:01:24.340 --> 00:01:27.140
from the control department within the next
few weeks.
00:01:27.140 --> 00:01:30.859
For now, please envision yourself working
in the new work environment with the attached
00:01:30.859 --> 00:01:32.320
images of the new office.
00:01:32.320 --> 00:01:33.479
Thank you.
00:01:33.479 --> 00:01:40.079
Okay, so in the first paragraph, I'm explaining
why we are relocating to a bigger place.
00:01:40.079 --> 00:01:45.400
In the next paragraph, I'm talking about the
timing of the move first, and now I needed
00:01:45.400 --> 00:01:50.069
to inform my colleagues in the Philippines
that detailed instructions will come later
00:01:50.069 --> 00:01:54.890
by writing: "instructions about the move will
be announced from the control department within
00:01:54.890 --> 00:01:57.030
the next few weeks.
00:01:57.030 --> 00:02:01.950
But this message is only for the Philippines
office, not for the Japan office, that's why
00:02:01.950 --> 00:02:06.380
I wrote: "for those working at Bizmates Philippines"
00:02:06.380 --> 00:02:11.280
And then I close the e-mail by writing a positive
message and letting the readers know there
00:02:11.280 --> 00:02:14.680
are sample images attached in this e-mail.
00:02:14.680 --> 00:02:18.350
So there you go, an e-mail to announce and
office relocation.
00:02:18.350 --> 00:02:23.200
I'm scheduled to visit the new office in October
and I'm certainly very very excited about it
00:02:23.820 --> 00:02:25.360
Okay, so that's it for today.
00:02:25.370 --> 00:02:27.120
Thanks for watching and I'll see you next
week.
